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you're walking on a tightrope
as thin and as brittle as
gossamer in the cool rain

                               I dare you to

take a barefoot baby step
all misty tundra and wind
lay in a cobweb hammock

                               be all

your afternoon reverie
all your forgotten regrets
you never thought would brighten

                               you dream

of the chances you will take
for it is not an old end--
it is a new beginning;
it is not a winter melt--
but a summer

                              to be
I dare you to be all you dream to be. 

EDIT: I fixed a typo :P

THANK YOU SO SO MUCH, :icongrimface242: FOR FEATURING THIS AS A DD! :love:
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Bookworm11114 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it's funny how you magically just stop replying to comments as it gets more and more
btw forgot to say congrats thought i did but i forgot 
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Lexis-andPals Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i would if i could but these are all writers before me wouldn't it be embarrassing to just go "thanks so much dear~" or "thank chuu bby" or "OMG TYSM SENPAI" like i usually do

and thanks late is better than never x33
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Bookworm11114 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
dude
frickinLM
MY WRITING.VIBESSSSSS
BUT NO TIME HUHUHU
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Lexis-andPals Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DID I MAKE YOU READ MY CONCEPT NOTES FOR A NEW BOOK I'M WORKING ON
IT'S PROBABLY SUICIDE TO TRY AND WRITE A BOOK WHILE SCRAMBLING AROUND WITH TICK
BUT
EEYYY
A WRITER WRITES WHEN S/HE PLEASES
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Bookworm11114 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
NO YOU DID NOT YOU FORGETFUL LITTLE CHIPMUNK
btw we should probably eat together one of these dayysssss just the two of us because IT HAS BEEN A WHILE EHHH
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CookieMonster421 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Lucky butt
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Lexis-andPals Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:pointandlaugh:
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AbbyMeyer Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Has a whimsical feel to it, despite the bold message. :)
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poetries Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
This is absolutely amazing. I love how it can be read two ways. :love:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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HoursUponHours Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW! Love the ending. Congrats on the DD!
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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Very nice, clever.
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EvranaWolfsong Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is wonderful! I like how you formatted it - it was very effective. It's a very beautiful piece :heart:
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callme007 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
:iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz:
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AlwaysRainCheck Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome! Brava Clap 
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moved-acc Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Wonderful
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herringbonnes Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
This is beautifully written! Exactly what I needed to hear today :) 
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CKdailyplanet Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Excellent work and well done! Congratulations on your DD.
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legomaestro Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice structure. I've never been a pro at reading hidden meanings, so the main message of the poem at least is straightforward. The other imagery is good though.
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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Namida713 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Very clever. Love the poem within the poem and the flow of the entirety of the piece.
Congrats on the DD~
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xLuvyna Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! I love how there's 'a poem within a poem'. <3 Lovely message and gorgeous imagery!
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ExpressKeeluh Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful :clap:
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Lexis-andPals Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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robodude2829 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice.
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Lexis-andPals Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I accept the dare. :salute:
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Lexis-andPals Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Go on courageous solider.
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